Seraiah+Ramsey

= = = = = Good job Seraiah! You are a good writer when you work at it. = = = = IS STEVE A GOOD PERSON OR NOT? I THINK HE IS A GOOD PERSON BECAUSE HE CARES ABOUT HIS BROTHER AND HIS FAMILY.HE WALKED OUT THE STORE INSTEAD OF GIVING A SIGNAL AND HE REGRETS WHAT HE DID. = = = = FIRST OF ALL, STEVE IS A GOOD GUY BECAUSE HE CARES ABOUT HIS FAMILY AND ALSO TALKS ABOUT HIS FAMILY ESPECIALLY HIS LITTLE BROTHER .HE SAYS THAT HE DOESNT WANT HIS LITTLE BROTHER TO END UP LIKE HIM AND HOW HE WANTS HIS LITTLE BROTHER TO GET INA SITUATION LIKE HIM = = = = SECOND OF ALL,STEVE IS A GOOD GUY CAUSE INSTEAD OF GIVING A SIGNAL HE JUST WALKED OUT THE STORE BECAUSE HE PROBALY REALIZED WHAT HE IS DOING SO HE JUST WALKED OUT. THATS WHY I THINK HE IS A GOOD PERSON AND THEN IF HE WAS A BAD GUY OR PERSON HE WOULD HAVE GAVE THEM A SIGNAL. = = = = LAST OF ALL, STEVE IS A GOOD PERSON BECAUSEHE REGRETS WHAT HE DID THE WHOLE STORE THING .HE DIDNT KNOW THE DUDE WAS GOING TO GET MURDERED. PLUS NO BAD GUY REGRETS WHAT THEY DID THERE EITHER HAPPY THEY DID OR SACTIFIED AND STEVE REGRETS IT WHAT HE DID ALL OF IT. HE SAID IN THE STORY WHEN HE WAS IN JAIL HE REGRETTED THE DECISIONS HE MADE .WHEN HE TOLD JAMES HE SAID HE REGRETTED IT. = = Can you find actual textual evidence to support that he regrets what he did that day? I think this would make this paragraph stronger. Look through the book to see what you can find. = = = = THIS IS WHY I THINK HE IS A GOOD PERSON HE CARES ABOUT HIS BROTHER AND FAMILY HE DIDNT GIVE A SIGNAL AND THAT HE REGRETS HIS DISCCISIONS HE MADE IN LIFE TO WHAT IT ADDED IT UP TO THE END. = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = 5-PARAGRAPH ESSAY BY SERAIAH =

= DO YOU PARENTS OUT THERE THINK THAT TELEVISION IS A BAD WAY TO SPEND THERE TIME PRODUCTIVELY WELL I DO I HAVE SOME REASONS. = = TELEVISION IS A GOOD WAY FOR TEENAGERS TO DO SOMETHING WITH THERE PRODUCTIVE TIME,ITS ALSO KEEPS THEM OUT OF TROUBLE, AND LASTLY IT ENTERTAINS THEM WHEN BEING MAD SO SIT BACK AND RELAX AND LISTEN TO WHAT I GOT TO SAY. =

=FIRST OF ALL, TELEVISION IS A GOOD WAY FOR TEENAGERS SPEND THERE TIME PRODUCTIVELY BECAUSE ITS SOMETHING FOR THEM TO DO WHEN THERE TIME WHEN THEY ARE BORED.THEY ALSO KEEP OUT OF BEING DESTRUCTIVE AND STUFF AND BEING SMART TO YOUR PARENTS AND BEING MEAN TO PEOPLE ITS ALSO PRODUCTIVE BECAUSE IT HAS DISADVANTAGES AND ADVANTAGES.=

= SECOND OF ALL, TELEVISION IS A ANOTHER GOOD WAY FOR TEENAGERS TO STAY OUT OF TROUBLE BECAUSE IT KEEPS THEM OUT OF TROUBLE SOME TEENAGERS ARE UP TO NO GOOD SOME INSTEAD OF WATCHING TELEVISION THEY ARE OUT SELLING DRUGS TO PEOPLE SHOOTING PEOPLE AND EVERYTHING YOU COULD PROBALY IMAGINE BAD. =

=THIRD OF ALL, TELEVISION IS A GOOD WAY FOR TEENAGERS TO BE ENTERTAINED SOME SNUGGLE UP TOGETHER WHEN WATCHING A MOVIE THEY ARE ENTERTAINED NOW BECAUSE IT BRINGS PLEASURE TO THE=

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Did you ever have a time when you couldn’t stop talking ?well I did so sit back and relax and listen “MR.BOll” I said as I grew mad he said “what” he said. “I need water” I said mad.the toughest thing in class to me is keeping my self from talking when i want so im trying to maintian it and talk less. Once in my life there was a day when I was sleep and my mom woke me up .I was in troble I knew it from the tone in my moms voice .She said “SERAIAH!!! You have to stop talking in class because it can affect you In school.I said “But it didn’t I lied hoping she didn’t get my progress report .Too late she did maybe I should make a run for it I thought.she showed me my grades and sad if I dont do good im not going the movies to see twilight breaking dawn.twilight series is the best movies of all time to me and i would just die .if i couldnt see twilight breaking dawn when it comes out.

Next day,I woke up at 7:20 I was ready for school .when I got got there in my homeroom class the bell rong for period 1 so I left I was talking the whole of period 1 and 2 .uh-oh I don’t know If I could stop talking but I tried to but then I thought of twilight.then i realized i had to stop talking if i wanted to see twilight.and i had to realize that my mom wasnt joking.when she said that.mom also said i got 3 strikes and im out just like baseball.so i started walking listening to my mp3 and the song played in twilight breaking dawn premire was playing and i got sad because i kept thinking how i might not stop talking. An hour later,I was in period 3 .i had already got in trouble in period 1 and 2 and now 3 period omg .now I was yelling at my health teacher mr.gadola for not letting me get water or go to the bathroom.So he gave me detention .The belled ringed and every one was to there fourth period.i was shaking the whole way and I think im going to talk but ill try my best.then it hit me i thought of twilight to re-gain strength not to talk. Eventually, I had mr.boll for 4th period and .i was in his class humming a song and then I wanted to start singing and then I did so after I got done singing. then I started talking in stead of being quiet so then the next five minutes my friend said “shut up” and I wasn’t mad I was glad cause now I wasn’t in trouble.her name is aniya and she is my bfffffff At last i realized i could trust my friend to show me from right and wrong and that i had ppl i could trust to keep me out of trouble now i get to go see twilight breaking dawn whoo hoo.TEAM EDWARD AND BELLA COME BACK AND SEE MY NET BOOOOKKK

Edward and bella after the wedding

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