Kenny+Robinson

Roger Gadell needs to just shut up and let the football players and play football and stop trying to change the game.I think he should do this because hes making the game soft,hes taking away peoples money ,and hes suspending players hurting there teams.

The game of football is starting to be less physical.Roger Gadell is making players scared to hit each other.Also he is telling player the way they play the game of football like James Harrison.Last Roger Gadell is taking away fans with all of his rules.

Roger Gadell keeps taking peoples money for no reason.Hes messing with alot of peoples income.Then hes taking food from kids and famlies.Last hes messing up kids getting shoes and cloths to wear.Roger Gadell is a bad bad man.

The NFL is hurting alot of teams and players.When the NFL suspends players the teams start to lose games.Also when players get suspended alot of people dont watch the game because there favorite player isnt playing in that game.Next they hurt players by finging them last year they fined James Harrison over 100,000 dollars last season.Last the NFL hurt teams when they suspend players and hurt there chances of making it to the super bowl.

Kenny- You have a really good start here. Good Three part thesis. I also think you did a good job with textual evidence and some explanation. I think the explanation could be strenthened in each of your paragraphs. Explanations could be 3 or 4 sentences that say why these places show that steve is what you say he is. There are also more instances of textual evidence that may help in some of these paragraphs. You are not limited to using only one example from the text in each paragraph if you know of more. Take a look at my introduction on the sheet I handed you as an example and see if you can improve you intoduction with a short summary. Good start here. YOu can be a really great student.

steve harmon is a good guy he was charged with murder but he was innocent.also all of his friends turned on him during the trial because they wanted time off there sentence but Steve Harmon is a good guy because he cares about people,he loves his family,and he was not part of the crime.

i think steve harmon is a good guy because he cares about people.i know this because he was scared to look at the picture of mr.nesbitt.this shows that steve really cares about people.also it shows that he has a heart.last it shows he has a soul

steve harmon really loves his family.i kno this from when he was talkin to his dad and asked were his mom was at.that shows thay he wants to talk to his mom.then it shows he misses his family.last it shows he want too get out of jail and be with his family.

steve harmon was not part of the crime.i kno this because he was innocent.this shows that steve harmon is not a lier.also it shows that he really went to the store to get some mints.last it shows that he is a good guy.

Basketball is a great sport to play because its a good way to exercise,it keeps you out of trouble,and you can get money for it if your good.

Basketball is a great way to exercise .First it helps you keep your wind up.Then it helps you lose alot of weight.Last it keeps you motivated.That's why its a good way to exercise.

Basketball almost always keeps you out of trouble.First you go out of town alot .Then practice keeps you out of the streets.Last you don't have to sell drugs to get thing you want.That's how basketball keeps you out of the streets.

Another reason basketball is good because it can pay the bills.They pay you if you go to the pros. Next when your doing things for money it helps you step your game up.Last you don't have to pay for anything.

There are many reasons people are playing all over the world .First it is good for your health,then it helps you take care of your family.Last it keeps you out of alot of trouble.Thats why many people play basketball. Kenny, there are still some changes here that you didn't take into account. I suggest that you take my advice to strengthen your paper. If not, at least re-read to correct any final errors. Good work on this, give it one final day to make it great. Also, you can take my red comments out after you have made the changes so that your final copy doesn't have my corrections. Good work.

It was a summer morning with the sound of birds chirping in the air.I was sad because my dad wasnt there at my game but i was still goin to play my hardest in the game.Even though i was goin to play my hardest i was wondering if i was goin to have a good game.

My mom took me to the game and wished me good luck.Befor i got out the car my mom said " i might cant come to the game." After she told me that i was a little mad but i delt with it.When i got out the car i smelled hot dogs,cheeseburgers,cheese fries,chicken,and candy.Also i heard the crowd screaming and the sound of football pads clacking like pow pow.

After i smelled all them things i went to go find my friends.When i found my friends we started walking around. When we were walking around we were talking and people were asking us if we were goin to win the game and we were confident so we were say yes to the people who were asking us.After that we had to go get our jerseys from our coach. .

After we got our jerseys we went to go sit in the stands for a minute.After we sat there for a minute we had to go practice .When we practiced it was for a very long time.Also it was very hot outside.

When we were done wit practice we lined up and went to the locker room for the wiegh in.When we went in the locker room it was dusty and it smelled like feet because of all the teams that were in there befor us .after the weigh in everybody got ready for the game.

My coach came in the locker room and said " its game time.'' When my coach said that i was still mad that my mom or dad was nt there so i was have misked emotions.After that we ran out the tunnel and the game started.We got the ball on the 30 yard line i steped in the huddle and looked in the stands and my mom was sitting there yalling my name cheering for me .Thats the time i learned i can count on my mom.

This is the story about my dad.My dad is tall,funny,and nice sometimes.Mydad is a football coach for wilkinsburg.my dad coaches for wilkinsburg midget leauge football.My dad was my football coach.My dad was my football coach about 6 years ago.

My dad really dont look like a football player.My dad looks like a basketball player .My dad is a basketball player though.My dad use to be tall and skinny but now he has a little belly.

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Im goin to tell you about the history of boxing. Boxing is a very popular sport .Many people all over the world box.People box to so they can feel good about there selfs .Now here is the history about the exciting modern-day cometition called boxing.

Here is the history of boxing .Boxing is a rich tradidtion and will always be. Did you know that boxing use to be fought naked .Also did you kno boxing use to be fought to the death.That means that nobody won the match until somebone died.Did you know that amature boxig use to be called fiba.Fiba means federation internationale de boxe amatuer.Boxing was founded around 4000 bc.That was very long ago.

These are facts about todays boxing .amatuer boxing now is an international sport in the usa. Next boxing nw is now wa safer than it use to be.So nw boxing is a curtain amout of time and rounds.Also amateur boxing is now called aiba.I really dont know what that means.Next boxing is very strict amatuer boxing is even sticter than proffcianal boxing.Last there is a special tournament for amatuer boxing called the golden gloves .It is an honor to be in that tournament .Thats the history and facts about boxing.

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