Destiny+Middleton

= Destiny- You have a really good start here. I like your thesis statement and your topic sentences and textual evidence. The part that is not here is the explanation of that text. This was the bullet points on your outline. You want to say why him saying that he didn't give a signal makes us think that he is innocent. Explain that. There could really be at least two sentences of explanation for each detail. = = Great start. = = It effects the way the reader reads the story because he makes us think hes innocent, he makes us think hes a good kid,and hes not a disrespectful person. The first way it effects the way the reader reads the story is he makes everyone think hes innocent. Even the evidence in tht txt says he didnt do nothing but walk out and didnt even give them a signal. The second way it effects the way the reader reads is that he is not a disrespectful kid. The evidence i found said he was going to act like he was scared of them. My last way is it effects the readers when they read because he says he is in a film club,gose to school,and hangs with good people. So if hes so good how did he end up in this mess eventually we will find out. = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = VIOLENECE IN VIDEO GAMES,MOVIES, AND MUSIC =

= = = Violence in video games,movies,and music are bad because it makes kids want to do it, kids get addicted, and they dont pay attention to there parents when they call them so if you want no why your kids need to stop, read this essy and lets see what you think? = = Im going to tell you why kids want to be violent. One thing is they watch what happens on television and end up doing it. Another thing is they see all types of ways to kill people or someone. Also they see what weapons they can use to hurt people. Thats how video games makes kids violent to one another. = = It also gets kids addicted by playing it constantly and they end up playing for about 3 to4 hours strait. Secondly they start to ignore there parents. My last thing for this section is after playing for so long there eyes start to turn red and if they take there eyes off the screen there eyes will burn. Thats why kids shouldnt play for a certain amount of time. They dont pay attention when there parents call them. one thing is like they think they dont have to listen to there parents. Another thing is they will start being disrespectful to adults. My final thing is lots of bad and horrible things will be in there head forever. = = That is why more kids in america are always on punishment either for bad games,movies, or even music. = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = = When I was ten I immediately found out I was no longer a spoiled little girl and I was mad. Before I was ten I was a pretty pretty little princess. Not long after that I just kept growing and growing. = = = = Meanwhile I start figuring out that I was getting older and that I’m supposed to. As soon as I figured it out I was like whoa! All at once my head start pounding and I blacked out. Then i start thinking about things when i was young and these are the things. =

= When i was two i got taght to do alot of things some things are to talk or dance. Im going to tell you how i learned to talk and how i learned to dance. = = = = My first thing is how i learned to dance. My mom use to always dance and i use to dance when i wasnt around her so one day she had a party for me just because she wanted to. She got me dressed and brong me down stairs and was like "GO DES GO DES" and i was just looking around like who are these people and why should i dance for them im not there entertainment they better go some were else so i just sat down and when they left my mom was dancing so i danced to thats how i learned how to dance. = = = = My second thing is how i learned to talk. I start talking when i was two i learned from listening to my mom and other siblings that is how i learned two talk. Finally i realize that i could count on my family. =

I remember being mad at my brother ryan because he would always bully some one in the house. Here are some physical discriptions of ryan. First he is fourteen years old. Next he has a huge head. My last thing is he has the chris brown hair color. Now i am going to give you some personality trait that he has. One trait is he is mean for no reason. I say that because he just be doing stupid stuff and blam it on us so we tell the truth and he gets mad. Also i say thats one of his traits because its true. Also he thinks he is hard because he gets whatever he wants. His second personality trait is he is a bully. I say that because he is always trying to hit and harass somebody. Thats what i have to say about my brother.

Boxing is a popular sport around the world. There are many different ways to compete in boxing. One way is training if your a beginer and you want to be a rookie. Another way is if your not use to it and its your first fight u will not be able to compete in open matches you have to train and show peolple that you got it and then you can compete as many times as you want. Also boxing is a long interesting sport.In boxing the earliest forms of it used spikes and were often fights to death.Secondly it was until 1888 that boxing became an olympic sport. My third thing is boxing began between Greeks and Romans empires.Thats whats all about my first paragraph. My second paragraph will also be about boxing. Boxing is a very dangerous sport. It talks about ways to get hurt and ways to die. The thing about boxing is you got to fight.

Write everything that you know about boxing : I know that there is....

5 questions aboutboxing....(1)How long do they train.. (2)How long is each fight.. (3)How was it back then for each fighter.. (4)Why did they start boxing knowing its dangerous... (5)What type of injuries happened that was very serious...

Destiny D. Middleton